The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

Education has always played a crucial part in everyone's life as it provides everything required for every single person to live happily and succeed academically. There i
s
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are
a wide variety of sources to get educated from like schools, the Internet, and our predecessors. While some people believe that acquiring knowledge and skills from family is more essential than that from schools, I would argue that both schools and family play an equal role in a person’s development and success.
Firstly
, education in schools is very much informative and systematic. Given the fact that teachers surely have better pedagogic skills than parents, the concepts delivered from them are absolutely in order and easy-to-understand.
For example
, a primary school teacher would know that
first
graders should be taught basic spellings but not high-level maths. Everything they follow has a definite structure and is well proven.
Furthermore
, in their schools, what students can learn about is not only academic subjects but
also
the outside world. They can
also
excitedly partake in a wide range of extracurricular activities, and
as a result
of
this
exposure, students are likely to be m
ore socially-
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more social
skilled and matured to confront any new challenges and obstacles in their lives.
Additionally
, the basic qualifications they acquire from schools could help students to select the appropriate field of studies
such
as engineering or economics when they leave high school and go on to higher education. These would, in turn, give a springboard to their future careers and wider success. On the other side of the argument, education from family is restricted to the experience and discipline. If a family has some skills which are not found anywhere,
then
this
could help their members get excelled. P
uskin,
a Russian great poet, is a case in point. H
aving been told
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Tells
Russian folk tales, poems, and stories b
y
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of
his grandmother and mother, and taught to read voraciously by his father since he was young, Puskin displayed a precocious talent for poetry from his early age,
then
thrived to success in his literary career and has become an inseparable part of the literary world of the Russian people. Apart from skills, members can
also
learn the values and traditions of their family, which are not completely taught in the outside world. If children are not fully aware of their families’ traditions and values, their moral outlooks and personality would probably be distorted and deteriorated. All in all,
although
getting educated by family is undoubtedly necessary, it should not be the only avenue of learning. I would suggest a combination of teachings from school and family to balance modern problems of family traditions losses and obsolete skills that are no longer needed in the digital age.
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