A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Tourism is one of the most important sources in economy for several

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around the world.Unfortunately, there are some disadvantages of expanding the tourism industry.

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as, influences the local culture and the crime rate. I believe, increasing in the

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of travellers will benefit the

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if they manage the process well and Improve the safety. Due to the disadvantages, there are different

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's size down the

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of visitors owing to the safety and the crime management.

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of all, tourists could influence the local culture because they have the economic power.

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, locals start learning their languages for attracting them to buy from their shops.

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, the crime

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and travellers

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have a Positive relationship.

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why, some countries are very strict by giving the permission for some developing countries.

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, there are many advantages for the tourism that help in developing the

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, some countries' economy relays in the tourism industry by 20% of their GDP as France.

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, it makes the economic cycle move faster by support different fields.

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, hospitality rely mostly on the power of tourists'

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of all, high standard facility and the safety may attract some investors to the

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, the unemployed rate will decrease dramatically by increasing in the visitors amount. To sum up, the advantages are more than the disadvantages. In my point of view, countries must apparent standards for entering the

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to achieve the benefits that we mentioned.