The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.
The given bar chart compares the number of social networking
sites
visited by internet users
in Canada over the span of two years from 2014 to 2015.
It is clear that
from the data, in general, the percentage of the Canadian people who did not use social media or used only one social networking site decreased slightly over the given period, while
the figure for Canadian people who used more than two sites
went up minimally.
The percentage of internet users
who did not use any social networking sites
slightly fell from 22% in 2014 to 21% after one year. In both years the highest proportion of users
"One site" category declined sharply from just over one-third
in 2014 to 28% at the end
of the period.
In 2014, the numbers who reported using two sites
, three sites
, four sites
, and five sites
made up 23%, 12 %, 5%, 2
% respectively. Correct word choice
and 2
However
, after a year all categories grew significantly namely the number of people using three sites
increased by 4% in 2015, which constituted 16%, four sites
slightly increased in 2015 making only 8% and Correct article usage
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users
are negligible changed and remain 4 %.Submitted by yuldoshev.muslim25 on
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