Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

Machines have replaced domestic manufacturing
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Several items that were previously handmade are recently done by machines
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In my opinion, I think the
use
of machines can bring about more advantages in manufacturing compared to any drawbacks it might bring
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Despite the minimal drawbacks below, I believe the benefits gained by using machines are extremely useful.
Firstly
, the
use
of machines generate faster and more efficient work.
This
would encourage
Incereased
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
productivity as more products are manufactured in limited time
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In herbal
cream mixing
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cream, mixing
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for example
, the
use
of electronic mixers
have
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has
replaced hand mixing and
as a result
,
more produce
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more producers
and faster deliveries are experienced.
Secondly
, most machines require little or no
suppervision
management by overseeing the performance or operation of a person or group
supervision
.
That is
to say, they are automated and there is no need to be physically present to observe the process.
For instance
, in bottling companies, the empty dirty bottles are transferred into the automated machine after imputing the information on the process to be initiated
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,
hence
the machine engages in the task
accordingly
. Admittedly, there are some issues involved with the
use
of machines
instead
of handwork. One problem associated with the
use
of machines is
lack
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the lack
of consistent power supply
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This
could affect productivity and slow down supply if there is no replacement
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for, national
power supply to carry on the task. Another negative aspect is
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
and servicing of machines. Most machines are expensive to keep running
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However
,
this
is not an impossible situation in small or large manufacturing firms with reasonable revenue and profit
generation
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generated
from sales of manufactured items.
For example
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a company that makes ten thousand
naira
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Naira
more
hourly profit from sales can comfortably maintain her machines. In conclusion
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speed and efficient manufacturing in
unsupervised manner
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an unsupervised manner
far outweighs the downsides that could result from the
use
of machines.
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