Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Hasn't everybody ever heard "
this
is a waste of public capital" or "governments shouldn't invest in that",
this
sort of topics are often trending topics in many different news and
also
in innumerable social media.
This
essay will tackle some reasons for
this
point of view. Undoubtedly, many governments around the whole wide world spend excessive amounts of money on art, music and
also
theatre under the phrase that
this
capital is for a cultural investment. As much as I am concerned, there are priorities in all nations
such
as
health
or education and both, at least in Spain have more problems than we would like to admit. Be that as it may, regrettably most times, governments invest public money in that field due to the fact they used it like mean of transport to spread ideological and
also
political postures among the populace. On the flip side, money is of necessary importance when it comes to free public
health
care.
Thus
, politics should invest more capital in public
health
service. To sum up, according to the several population stance, public funds should be spent on what citizens really need for their general wellbeing and there is no doubt of a shadow that
health
is the most important priority.
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