You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear John, I am writing
this
letter with great pleasure to give you career advice and will definitely suggest
you
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the best possible solution according to my aura. As per my understanding, I would ask you to go for a job as you have plentiful knowledge of engines and
mechanical
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the mechanical
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sector so you should not waste time
in
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getting a piece of paper from a university. Needless to say, I noticed you are keen
towards
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on
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cars from childhood and love to explore their functionality in detail. The hobby of grabbing minor studies perfectly makes you
to
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develop into an outstanding mechanic who is repairing and servicing home and neighbourhood vehicles from teenage. I am sure that you already know well about
this
field and
well
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versed enough to use these rich skills in the market to earn some money. I would suggest
to go
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for a job without a single thought as you are the perfect fit for any workshop and
college
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a college
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degree would only waste taste, money and other resources.
Lastly
, I would like to remind you that your parents have a huge loan and they are in debt
from
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last
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the last
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decade. You are the only hope to avoid bankruptcy and fulfil the necessities of life as you have a younger sister who
also
need
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financial support for basic primary school education. Please write me down if you require any kind of help. I would love to hear from you soon regarding your decision. Thank you, Best Wishes Peter
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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