You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear John, I am writing

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letter with great pleasure to give you career advice and will definitely suggest

you

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apply

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the best possible solution according to my aura. As per my understanding, I would ask you to go for a job as you have plentiful knowledge of engines and

mechanical

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the mechanical

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sector so you should not waste time

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getting a piece of paper from a university. Needless to say, I noticed you are keen

towards

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cars from childhood and love to explore their functionality in detail. The hobby of grabbing minor studies perfectly makes you

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apply

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develop into an outstanding mechanic who is repairing and servicing home and neighbourhood vehicles from teenage. I am sure that you already know well about

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field and

well

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versed enough to use these rich skills in the market to earn some money. I would suggest

to go

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for a job without a single thought as you are the perfect fit for any workshop and

college

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a college

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degree would only waste taste, money and other resources.

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, I would like to remind you that your parents have a huge loan and they are in debt

from

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for

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last

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the last

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decade. You are the only hope to avoid bankruptcy and fulfil the necessities of life as you have a younger sister who

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need

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needs

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financial support for basic primary school education. Please write me down if you require any kind of help. I would love to hear from you soon regarding your decision. Thank you, Best Wishes Peter

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

250 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Real-world experience
Practical experience
Financial independence
On-the-job training
Student loan debt
Personal growth
Professional networking
Career development
Skilled workers
Job market
Career goals
Immediate income
Professional relationships
Market demand
Defining interests
Educational investments

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