Home schooling is getting a lot importance over traditional learning environment provided by schools. What is your opinion on the subject?

It is considered that studying from
home
is more effective than
traditional method
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traditional methods
the traditional method
of
study
launced
set up or found
launched
by
institute
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the institute
.
This
essay will discuss on both view and give
an
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a
verdict why learning at
school
with
teacher
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a teacher
teachers
and a peer is more imperative than
home
learning. On one hand
home
study
has always become easy for
pupil
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the pupil
a pupil
pupils
because of its flexibility of time and economic point of view. Even though parents have
hectic
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a hectic life
hectic lives
life
if the student are learning from
home
their parents can confer them time for
study
.
Moreover
, it is
more cheaper
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cheaper
than a peer or
teacher
on
school
so anyone
can joined
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can join
and enhance their
study
level.
For instance
, a recent research had concluded that 90% parents prefer their children to
study
from
home
as they are busy in their
life
and it's budget friendly.
However
,
on the other hand
, most of the people prefer their children to
study
on
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at
in
school
with a
teacher
and a group of student. Even though it is more expensive than
home
study
, it's has more positive effect on the pupil
life
.
Furthermore
,
this
type of learning
assist
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assists
the children to be more socialise and build up their
confident
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confidence
and self esteem, which are obligatory to get success in their career.
For example
, a
recet
new
recent
study
had proved
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proved
has proven
that most of the
student
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students
learn about the socialise and motivated to self reliant and esteem when they are in
school
life
and learning with their friends.
In addition
, they
also
learn about the patience and cooperation importance.
Furthermore
,
teacher
direct
indulgement
angered at something unjust or wrong
indignant
in their
study
always flourish
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always flourishes
them to get better performance as they assist them to recognise their weakness and Propel them to
study
hard to give success in their goal.
to
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To
exemplify, paper based exam held by
teacher
assist them to know how much pupil
are doing
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is doing
bettter
(comparative of 'good') superior to another (of the same class or set or kind) in excellence or quality or desirability or suitability; more highly skilled than another
better
in their
study
and they can aid them to do better.
Hence
,
Accept space
,
there is no doubt that
school
traditional
study
moreveffective
than
home
class.
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