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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is suggested by some people that
music
 is the efficient way of bringing various ages of groups and cultures together.
However
 , I
w
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ould partially agree with
this
 statement because not in all case
s various cul
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cases, various
tures and age groups may join together due to
music
.
To begin
 with, in most cases there are gaps between young and old generation toward each of their opinion and taste.
For instance
, when it comes to
music
 preference older generations woul
d pre
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Would
fer to listen some insightful and classical
music
, while younger people more interested in listening rock , p
op
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,
 genres of
music
.
Thus
, it seems doubtful that
music
 can bring different tastes of young and senior people together.
On the other hand
,
music
 may be one reason to join different cultures of people together.
For example
,it
i
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,
s common to see
music
 lovers around the world unite on social networks and are discussing common liking musics.
Hence
,
music
 can be a great factor to create a friendship between different nationalities over the world. In conclusion, there can be some gene
ration dif
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generational
ferences in terms of
music
 , y
et
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 it might improve fren
dship bet
the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendship
ween nati
ons.
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Nations
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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