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It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?

#retirement #time #person’s #life
A person plans and saves for his after
work
life
 throughout his living.
Although
, it is
percieved
detected by instinct or inference rather than by recognized perceptual cues
perceived
 that retirement is the blossom period of one's
life
,
however
, many contend
agaist
in contact with
against
this
 say. I feel that in our modern society, people are not ready for
this
 isolation,
although
 I stand
with
Suggestion
by
 the former thought, but I have a variation
to
Suggestion
of
 it.. In
this
 essay we will discuss
this
 in detail and will draw an inference.
Retiral
Suggestion
Retrial
 is considered as enjoyment and rest period in man's
life
 after his long
work
 journey. Everyone has a fantasy to enjoy their lives with their
next
 generation and family after a certain age. A study by human psychology department of Oxford university states that when an individual gets his wonder space through his retire living, his healthy
life
 span increases by 5 years. I have personally seen changes in my father after his retirement, which I never observed when he was working, albeit, he is more energetic and lively as he is enjoying with his family and friends. Having said that,
this
 stage certainly is the ecstatic time of one's
life
. On the flip side, Is
this
 perception totally valid in our busy modern society?
This
 has become a contentious and inevitable issue. Albeit, a person plans for his after
work
life
, yet, it does not ascertains that he will have everything he planned for, especially the time of his
next
 generation. I have seen my uncle going
in
Suggestion
into
 depression after his retirement, as his children are busy with their
work
,
moreover
, the grandchildren are busy with their school and after
schools
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school
 activities,
therefore
, he got trapped in the world of isolation and gradually
this
 had a detrimental effect on both, his mental and physical health.
Nonetheless
, these
rigrous
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
rigorous
 schedules
have paramountly deteriorated
Suggestion
permanently deteriorated
have permanently deteriorated
 the
work
life
 and after
work
life
 of people. To recapitulate, having mulled over above information and
delberating
carefully thought out in advance
deliberating
 all the facts, it can be deducted that, even though everyone dreams and plans of a happy run along
life
, still the reality is different
for
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from
 the association. Since, the
work
life
 balance has become an obstacle for most of us, there,
forethe
Suggestion
fore the
 after
work
life
 has
also
 got
in
Suggestion
into
 a
dilema
state of uncertainty or perplexity especially as requiring a choice between equally unfavorable options
dilemma
 for the majority.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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