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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about the problem?

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Despite the modernization happened in agriculture sectors, some people are still living with lack of
food
.
This
 is because of rapid growth of population numbers and reduction of cultivating land. It can be tackled by developing social welfare state so authorities will take care of
basic needs
Suggestion
the basic needs
 of its citizens. Increasing
number
Suggestion
amount
 of population and shrinkage of harvesting lands create pressure to the total production.
On the other hand
, it can be said that when need raises
then
 the amount of supply, some people will remain unfed. In case of booming population, it is not possible to provide
food
 to all due to
food
 production cannot be increased according to wish. It
also
 has a limit.
Secondly
, if land is not available to cultivate,
then
 it is not possible to meet the rising
food
 demand. Social welfare state is that who focuses the basic needs of its pupils
first
,
then
 deals other issues.
Consequently
, they could arrange wellbeing programs for instances
food
 for hunger, unemployment allowance and
microcredit
 program for ultra-poor.
Food
 for hunger is a well- known charity activities and it
has been running
Suggestion
has run
 since ancient times.
In addition
, allowance for
jobless
Suggestion
the jobless
 is a popular concept in many western
countries so
Accept comma addition
countries, so
 the government will pay a marginal amount of money for being unable to arrange a job of the individual.
Furthermore
,
microcredit
 programs are extremely famous in developing countries.
For example
, BRAC becomes the largest NGO in the world through
such
 kind of
microcredit program
Suggestion
microcredit programs
a microcredit program
. In conclusion,
foodless
not revering god
godless
 people are all around the
globe including
Accept comma addition
globe, including
 those countries, who are very rich in farm management. Human activities are responsible for being empty stomach of human
kind so
Accept comma addition
kind, so
 they need to way out to address dying from hunger.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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