Over recent years, mobile phones have become an indispensable tool in our daily lives. However, there are several problems such as social and medical which must not be ignored. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.

There is no doubt that the mobile
phone
is essential more than ever before. The question is, does the
phone
affect our lives from medical and social
perspitive
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
? In
this
essay we will
descuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discusses
discussed
the advantages and disadvantages of using the mobile phones. Due to the advantages, the mobile things play an important role in our daily bases life.
First
of all, mobile Phones could help
use
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
to do the complicated things that we use to do it from computers by
tip
Suggestion
the tip
of finger.
Secondly
, by
this
technology we could
comunicate
transmit information
communicate
with
any body
any person
anybody
around the world in
second
Suggestion
seconds
a second
the second
.
For instance
, my sister in the USA and my mother in Jordan
thay
people in general
they
that
know about each other more than their families in the same home because of the
vedio
the visible part of a television transmission
video
calls.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of disadvantages of mobile phones.
First
things
first
, phones
manefacturing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
increase the Co2
emtion
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emission
owing to have
more environment
Suggestion
more environmental
problems.
Second
of all, there are different medical problems that happen from the
singnal
any nonverbal action or gesture that encodes a message
signal
that the
phone
preduse
someone who manufactures something
producer
produces
.
Lastly
, the
phone
affect
Suggestion
affects
physical social
Accept comma addition
physical, social
activity to make it more
in
Suggestion
on
the internet. In
cunclosion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
, the mobile
phone
as any technology has advantages and disadvantages. But if we use it
wisly
in a wise manner
wisely
, we could gain the
penifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
and avoid several problems
such
as environmental and medical problems.
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