Some people believe that it would be better if the whole family involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

Nowadays due

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Nowadays, due

to hectic lifestyle, people are bound to raise their young ones in nuclear

family which

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family, which

raise discussion

that is

it better to

upbring

the children in joint family. In my opinion, family plays a cardinal role in the development a child which irreplaceable.

Firstly

, joint Families includes various personalities with leave their own impression on children and

this

leads in better development. To illustrate

this

,

grandparents

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the grandparents

are believed to impart morals and values in kids helping them to know their limits in respect to their behaviour and activities. Children learn to give respect to everyone and get praise in return which boost them to do goodwill to others.

Secondly

, it is often seen in modern family that toddlers are affected with new illnesses like hyper syndrome and delayed milestone in relation to speech.

This

means that toddlers get frustrated in nuclear families as they get bored of their parents, results in augmentation of anger in them and in continuation due to lack of contact of family members, there is

delay

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a delay

in formation of speech in them.

This

leads to a horrendous situation as

kids

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the kids

are getting

retard

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retarded

. Joint family

overcome

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overcomes

these diseases easily as there are

variety

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a variety

of options available in front of young minds to learn the diversity and keep them Involve in activities, avoiding the boredom and frustration.

Thirdly

, expanded families support their children to try new activities which many times results in innovations one cannot think of.

Furthermore

, children feel safe under the Shadow of uncles and aunts as they know the warmth eldest shower on them. Mentally and physically, young ones with the support of elders in wider families learn to behave socially which widen the

thinking perspective

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thinking, perspective

of children which is not possible in single family structure.

Lastly

, large families

contribute

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contributes

in avoiding the unnecessary conflicts between father and mother because of which many times children suffer.

For example

, it is often seen that in case of disagreement in nuclear families, the

frustation

the feeling that accompanies an experience of being thwarted in attaining your goals

frustration

blown upon

young ones

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the young ones

by scolding or beating them as there is no one present to handle the situation.

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conclusion joint

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conclusion, joint

families are integral in better raising of the kids and there are many facts which support the same as discussed above.