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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think the advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, the idea of having a single
language
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 as an international official
language
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has been receiving
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is receiving
 a great deal of public attention.
Although
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 speaking the same
language
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 around the globe appears attractive, the disadvantages will be far more significant. On the one hand, there are a number of advantages of
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 idea.
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, since speaking the same
language
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 does reduce the barriers between countries, it improves relationships between humankind. In fact, it will have a beneficial effect on communication between people from different countries, which eradicates misunderstandings and conflicts.
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, by speaking the universal
language
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, excellent individuals are likely to expand their career prospects.
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 means that employees can seek job opportunities beyond national borders, whereas, hiring managers can enjoy a wider talent pool with potential candidates of all races and ethnicities. There are,
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, some downsides that can easily overshadow the potential benefits of a common
language
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 around the globe.
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, losing a
language
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 means losing a culture. In fact, apart from being a communicating tool,
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language
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the language
 includes history, culture, and custom of the country where it is spoken so that
language
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, which should not be forgotten.
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, if a single
language
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 is united, the countries would become more similar and less unique.
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 means that the adoption of a universal
language
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 would virtually annihilate a rich history and unique customs associated with a country. In conclusion,
although
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 the emergence of a universal
language
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 seems beneficial, it would pose a major threat to culture diversity and historical values.
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