Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion

In these days, there are communities who furnish our book rooms with technologies and they think without books
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
can learn new things more with hi-tech
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
. Librarians intension is supplying our
bibliothecas
with interesting books and they want people who contribute studios with technologies they should not focus on to
this
. There are two types of humans who think about it different opinions. So, in
this
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will be discussed both of these concepts. On the one hand, in
there
of them or themselves
their
publics who agree with
this
view. They consider that our younger generations can know more news
from
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about
books without any hi-tech
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
. So, they want if humans have more money for
provide
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providing
libraries with computers,
this
kind of people can equip the books which we can get more
informations
a message received and understood
information
than videos and DVDs.
On the other hand
, in despite of these views there are
second type
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the second type
a second type
of communities who imagine the opposite side of
former people's idea
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the former people's idea
. So, they suppose that it is not bad, if there are technologies with useful books. Because, in
there
of them or themselves
their
pupils who want to study or work with computers.
Also
, it is more comfortable and easier find
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
dates
details
from hi-tech
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
than books and you use
from
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of
your time efficiently. To sum up, more humans view that if people want to learn something
seriously they
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seriously, they
know it without hi-tech
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
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and others consider that we need technologies in our public libraries. From my point of view, former public's opinion is true. Because of, we go to the book rooms to read a book. If we want to find
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
dates
from
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computer, it
the computer it
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all have in our
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