Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All level of education, from primary to tertiary school should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that
education
is the backbone of a nation's success.
Although
some people believe tha
t
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That
education
should be made free to all people regardless of their economic background, i t
h
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ink
this
would put too much burden on the
government
. In my opinion, providing free
education
to
on
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for
ly gifted student is a bet
ter approach as
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A better approach
Better approach
this
would ensure proper use of resources without getting financial instability. On the one hand, providing free
education
to everyone will bring about numerous problems.
Firstly
,
gov
ernment wo
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the government
uld hav
e to
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Have
bear all the expenditures of schools, colleges and universities.
In other words
,
gov
ernment wo
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the government
uld need to stop investing on
ot
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in
her crucial sectors,
such
as health care and transportation, in order to keep the educational institution running.
As a result
, lots of people would suffer miserably due to lack of medicine and transports, which is likely to impede the pro
gression of
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progress
a country.
Secondly
, some people might not take
education
seriously because making
education
free would lessen it'
s va
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
lue.
For instance
, if
gov
ernment ha
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the government
d decided to offer
education
fully out of cost,
then
a lot of people would have enrolled for
un
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in
iversity
education
only to drop out after completing a few semesters.
This
would lead not only to wastage of
gov
ernment's resources bu
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the government's resources
t
also
it'
s fi
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
nances.
On the other hand
, the best solution would be to ensure free
education
only for talented student.
This
is because, it
wo
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It
uld reduce the financial strain on the
government
, which could
otherwise
possibly become a hindrance to it'
s ec
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
onomic development.
Moreover
, brilliant students would not be deprived of higher
education
, providing them with the opportunity to become potential citizen of the nation.
For instance
, in Japan, the
government
provides it'
s br
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
ight students with full scholarships, which act as an incentive for them to perform better in their academic subjects.
Consequently
, the resources of the
government
would be put to their best uses by training the right people. In conclusion, i t
h
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ink it is better to provide free
education
to special students only because
this
would make sure pro
per ut
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Proper
ilization of
gov
ernment's fu
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government
nds.
Furthermore
,it
Accept space
,
is not feasible for maj
ority of
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the majority
the countries to cover all the educational expenses of it'
s en
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
tire citizens.
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