Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
Success has become the only factor of measurement in the society under which children are burdened, and due to the fact parents put undue stress on their children to achieve maximum in every field. In my opinion, it is more of a negative development rather than positive.
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, due to stiff competition in the market, parents fears, their children of lagging behind and in the process, pressurize kids to stand top in the class. To illustrate Linking Words
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, due to cut-throat competition, the pace of learning has become very rapid and it has become mandatory for every ward to catch up with the come. Linking Words
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in turn results in children burdened with stress, which is hard to handle. Linking Words
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, parents impose their unfulfilled dreams on minors to see kids turning them into reality. It is often seen that parents bet hike on youngsters to achieve goals attached to their emotions which load strain on children's brain of not letting their parents dream shatter. Linking Words
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, success defines the standard of life and almost everyone craves for it by doing the hard work themselves or expect from their kids.
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leads in augmentation in suicide rates among students. Linking Words
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is because, children's fear of failure and dependency of future on markets rather than interpersonal skills. To exemplify, career like doctors and engineers require intensive study of 14 to 16 hours a day including extra classes. When after Linking Words
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a serious effort, students fail to get selected, they opt to end of life due to failure and letting they parent's expectation unfulfilled. Linking Words
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, unnecessary tension leads to psychological problems which are hard to cure. In present times, doctors agree that there is an unexpected increase in cases related to study pressure and fear of failure among pupils. Linking Words
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, the development of kids affected in a negative way due to the burden of the syllabus. Lack of knowledge about various career options Linking Words
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in following the crowd blindly resulting in extra pressure by parents on their kids
In conclusion, in these hard times, the strain put on children to achieve the impossible put parents in a grim situation to think seriously about Suggestion
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hold the view to stop putting pressure on kids to succeed, rather helping them to enjoy every task they do in life.Linking Words
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