Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Tom, Hi there. I was delighted when I saw your letter containing the invitation to watch a movie in a theatre. I'm thankful to you for that.

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that day I shall go out of the city for business

purpose

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. So, I would not able to join you for a movie. I really feel sorry about

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inconvenience. But, I have an idea that I recently

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with our mutual friend jack and he

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told me that let's make a plan to watch a movie together. I will sure that he would like to join you for a film. I knew

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for a long time and he

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good

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fun loving

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person. You would love his company and he is

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filming

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buff person. Yours sincerely, Alex

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

132 words

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