Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Online reading materials

has become

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have become

a preferred method of learning to read for children,

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some others still believe printed materials are more effective in improving kids learning. In my opinion, both learning methods could be

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effective

effected

depending on the kid’s learning capability.

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believe that children’s engagement is important. It is argued by some individuals that only digital materials should be given to a kid for learning to read, while some others opined that only published materials should be adopted. In my opinion, both learning methods should be used interchangeably, in order to achieve

optimum outcome

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optimum outcomes

the optimum outcome

an optimum outcome

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, the resourcefulness of online study is an essential point to consider. Studying online would allow children to have an unlimited access to a wide range of information within a limited time.

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a plethora of information can be easily reachable from websites

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as google, Wikipedia and etc.

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there

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a lot of free or inexpensive data to be found online which would outweigh the exorbitant prices of books.

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use of the internet can cause health

hazards including

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hazards, including

shortsightedness and other eye defects

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, even though printed

matters

the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object

materials

are more pricy than online materials, they are rated to be more effective in terms of readability.

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, printed materials are more reliable as a point of referencing in relating an idea collectively among learners.

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learning medium is safe from technological hassles attached to the use of media and digital gadget breakdowns. To conclude

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learning is inevitable in every living process. Studying online and simultaneously using textbooks are vital towards resource availability and comprehension

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the need to combine both which could as well, eliminate health hazards.