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An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain where did you find this information why you want to apply this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply

#company #job #work #information #qualification #position
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding the job titled "Tech Support Elit Specialist", which was posted for the Avigilon Support department. Upon surfing LinkedIn, I came across
this
 career advertisement. After carefully reviewing the job requirements, I came to understand that my skills, experiences, and expertise are aligned with your needs. I have over 10 years of experience in different roles in IT Support, So I am sure I can tackle the duties assigned to
this
 position very well.
Additionally
, attached you can find my resume and cover letter. I look forward to confirming an interview meeting. Kind regards, Zari Shamsa
Submitted by zari.shamsa40 on

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Task Response
Consider adding more detail about your specific qualifications and how they particularly align with the job requirements.
Coherence and Cohesion
Although brief, your paragraphs are clearly focused and mostly well-organized. Elaborating a bit more on your experiences could enhance coherence.
Tone
Effective greeting and closing of the letter.
Structure
Good use of structure to introduce, detail and conclude your letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • job opportunity
  • professional networking site
  • job board
  • referral
  • enthusiasm
  • relevant qualifications
  • certifications
  • previous work experiences
  • suitable candidate
  • career aspirations
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