You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Tina working
at
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a
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for a
course
which I saw in advertisement
. I would like to explain detailed information in Correct article usage
the advertisement
this
letter.
To begin
with, this
training course
that I am interested at
is to provide trainees Change preposition
in
knowledge
about the current international trends within different commercial businesses. Change preposition
with knowledge
Besides
, it would demonstrate new marketing too Is based on your target segment.
In addition
to it, I would like to apply for a
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apply
financier
assistance from Replace the word
financial
company
to promote my skills. As one of the Add an article
the company
company
's programs, everyone can submit one application of
individual learning funds. Change preposition
for
Hence
, I hope our company
can accept my application for this
training course
.
As working in the marketing department, I should keep updating the relevant information of business trends. It is beneficial for me, as a part of marketing team members to decide our marketing strategies. Moreover
, It will provide me a
guideline of potential negative impacts which came from our competitors.
To conclude, I certainly want to participate in Add the preposition
with a
this
training course
. I hope our company
can agree with my plan based on these benefits.
Your
Sincerely,
TinaCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.