Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are few people who believe that, who break the law should be punished and send to
jail
, but the other majority thinks that instead
they should be punished by giving them community work
. In this
essay I would like to put my point of view for both side's with relevant examples.
Firstly
, Prison is building for the reason, that who are harmful to our society should be punished. But, if we put all the criminal people in jail
even if they had done minor crime
, that will encourage them and turn them into becoming bigger criminals. For example
, if someone did theft for the first
time due to helpless and send to jail
for a long time, then
it will force him to do big crime
as he will be interacting with other criminals.
Secondly
, If they are given second chance
Suggestion
a second chance
then
it's given the opportunity to improve and they will learn their lesson. Instead
of putting them in prison with other criminal who have done very serious crime
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crime, then
then
due to jail
environment they will turn out like them. So, instead
they should be punished by giving community work
. For example
, Peoples who did a small crime
, due to helpless, and they feel they are guilty then
they should be given second chance
and give social service Suggestion
a second chance
work
so later once they finish their punishment then
they are able to work
in the field without any regret.
To summarize, as every crime
is not same, the same way every criminal is not same, who want to improve them self they should be given the opportunity. As one person goes to jail
their future is done for and they won't get good job opportunities and as well as society won't welcome them as they use to be even if they do minor crime
. But, by giving them the opportunity to do right after their mistake will change that and it will open doors for them in society.Submitted by binev71847 on
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