subjects like arts, music,and drama are more important than other subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. do you agree or disagree?
The balance between academic curriculums and art curriculums has always been the hottest yet controversial issue for years. Some people claim that artistic courses
sould
be attached more importance than others. From my perspective, I oppose expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
this
statement for several reasons. Ideas with my own opinion together will be further
discussed and elaborated in this
essay.
To begin
with, the traditional subjects such
as math, science, or language are essentail
in real life. absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
For instance
, the course of language is aimed to impart vocabulary, knowledge and technique about writing and reading. Without the basic literate skill, it would be arduous to express yourself and communicate with people in a proper way, not to mention with having exceptional competency and outstanding perfoemence
in their future career. a dramatic or musical entertainment
performance
Accordingly
, leaning these traditional subjects is fundamental and vital.
Moreover
, all the subjects should have equal value. To illustrate, it is undouted
that not every student has a talent for physics, literature, or history. Many students only do the best work when they are able to be creative like music, dance, or painting. As all students are different as well as Not doubted; not called in question; indubitable; indisputable
undoubted
have
enthusiasm in distinct field. Suggestion
having
Consequently
, no sphere should be considered as more important than other
.
In conclusion, those compulsory curriculums are the bedrocks of the human development which should not be undermined; meanwhile, every any of various alternatives; some other
another
subjects
should enjoy the same priority in order to Suggestion
subject
satisfied
the requests of students as much as possible. Suggestion
satisfy
As a result
, the suggestion of paying more attention on artistic courses cannot be supported. It should be left to our youngsters to pursue their own interest.Submitted by p282734 on
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