The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. the table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparations where relevant.
The given pie chart provides the percentage of the types of used languages online in 2001. The table illustrates the number of people being online each year and what
this
figure accounted for global
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the global
a global
population
from 1997 to 2001.
Generally, English was the most popular language that was used in
the net in DecemberChange preposition
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,
2001. The percentage of the world’s Remove the comma
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population
who was online reached highest
in 2000.
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the highest
To begin
with, English language users made up 43% of the total, which was approximately 20 times more than Dutch language users. Japanese and Chinese languages occupied the second
and third
places with figures at 8.9% and 8.8% respectively. German, Spanish, Korean, Italian, French and Portuguese languages made up 27,6% collectively and all of these were lower than 7%.
Meanwhile, it can be clear that the number of people online saw a gradual increase year on year during the observed period but it accounted for a small part of world
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the world
population
. The highest percentage of global
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the global
population
who was online was 60% in August 2000. In the meantime, the highest number of people who were online was 513 millions
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million
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per cent
global
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the global
population
. This
figure is still 6.6% more than that in November 1997.Submitted by phihuyenphuong on
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