‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

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It is often said meaningful to society that all

citizen

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citizens

should contribute settled amount of their income to charity because there is a large number of those who is in need of a financial support.It seems to me that the sheer cost of living

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deviating from

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the intended goal

makes

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impractical aspiration

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no matter how much we might admire the idea. The main obstacle would appear to be the numbers of middle class which cover approximately half of the world population of those who are living on a budget can barely meet their own needs.Especially in developing countries

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as Mongolia

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the tax burden on workers becomes intolerably high

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and

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can eventually increase the cost of living

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;

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it may be impossible for those

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donating

money.A

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issue relates to

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a native or inhabitant of Denmark

Dane

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which may not be able to reach the person who the donation are supposed to be received.

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means that

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conforming exactly or almost exactly to fact or to a standard or performing with total accuracy

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money might be intended for building or vanished the midst even perhaps some will be able to evade

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seem to demonstrate the it cannot be completely implemented. Admittedly

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I agree with those who argue that contributing to charity is a worthy ambition for a country to have.

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aspiration suffers significantly when confronted with financial reality. To summarize

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it seems that poverty,

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the probability

of not adhering

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main cause

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the main cause

of donating earnings to charity.

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this

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needs to be supplemented

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

various types

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as donation of blood

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organ and old clothing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

231 words

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‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In some countries, owning a home rether than renting one is very important for people

The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Task 2, People naturally resist making changes in their lives. what kind of problems can this cause? what solutions can you suggest?