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All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem effects both children and adults. What are the reason for this rise in obesity. How could it be tackled?

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Obesity is an epidemic type of disease and it is a very common disease around the world. Young and old have been suffering from the disease together since long.
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 and purpose some solutions. One of the main causes of the problem is that people overeating products. When people eat a lot of food, their
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 begins to accumulate excess food as fat.
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, the person begins to feel heavy, which can lead to various diseases. The solution is for the people should lead a healthy lifestyle, avoid eating harmful products as much as possible, reduce the consumption of calorie products. People should eat as light a meal as possible, especially in the evening, and drink plenty of water throughout the
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. Especially if it increases the consumption of fruits and vegetables, it is very beneficial for health as well as for the
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. Another problem is that people are less active during the
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. People, especially the elderly, spend a lot of time at home, some people do not do sports, their movements during the
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, at low activity, excess substances in the human
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 remain insoluble, leading to obesity. To tackle
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 issue, people should play sports as much as possible.
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 else even doing simple daily exercises can be very beneficial for the
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. Morning exercise will help you dissolve excess fat in your
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 and you can lose weight effectively soon. To sum up, obesity is widespread among people and it is leading to various bad consequences. The reasons for
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