The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the average Australian household’s usage of
energy
and the emissions of
greenhouse
gas
that
results
Correct subject-verb agreement
result
show examples
from it respectively. The operations in both graphs are given in percentages.
Overall
,
according to
the
charts
Add a comma
,charts
show examples
the main
energy
user in Australian
home
Fix the agreement mistake
homes
show examples
is the heating
while
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
water heating emits the biggest percentage of
greenhouse
gas
. Only a tiny fraction of
energy
and
greenhouse
gas
emission
Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
show examples
comes from the cooling operation. It can be clearly seen that Australians use 42% of
energy
Correct pronoun usage
their energy
show examples
on heating which results in as less as 15% of
gas
emission
Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
show examples
. Water heating utilizes exactly 30% of the
energy
and releases nearly a
third
of the
greenhouse
gas
(32%). The lowest percentage of
energy
(2%) and
greenhouse
gas
(3%) accounts for
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
cooling. The charts show
also
that refrigeration, other appliances and lighting which utilize roughly a quarter of the
energy
(7%,15% and 4% respectively) are contributing to exactly
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
half of the
greenhouse
gas
emissions (14%, 28% and 8%
accordingly
).
Submitted by boryanadimitrova91 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: