An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear John, I just read your letter about your wish to visit my country. Congratulation
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for getting employment
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Google. May God succeed you! You may do a favour on behalf of me to urge job there. You'd better
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arrive in the winter season, as
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here
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were many places that you simply would love to travel
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a cold session. It doesn't suggest I'm disappointing you. You could come whenever you would like. As you wrote in the letter you need habitation, you could remain at my home if you don't have any trouble, there are two types of settlement. In the
first
residency, you'll get a single bedroom including a couch, lounge chair, cabinet and TV. It has a balcony as well, where you'll view
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ocean.
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, it gives a free meal for breakfast and dinner.
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, it only takes $5k in the day whereas
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home charges $8k every day, but It's many facilities too. Except for
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residency benefits, here you could have
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a vehicle
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to travel, and It
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has a swimming pool.
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numerous
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that you simply might prefer to visit. As I'm aware of your fond, you must like a natural place.
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, I recommend you to travel
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South Temple, It's a marvellous view and pleasant nature. And another site is North Temple, there you get peace, joy and rest. I firmly believe you'd like
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place. I look forward to your reply about your appearance. Chris
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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