Write about the following topic: The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The reference model used during the simulation is the business reference model for the He
alth care i
Suggestion
Healthcare
ndustry. The reference model is used to guide the implementation of a
market
opportunity
by collaborating with different departments within the organization. In our case the
market
opportunity
is identifying the source of new revenue (by introducing the generic
drug
in new countries) and expanding the revenue by re-launching it as a
drug
to curb caffeine ca
rvings a
an intense desire for some particular thing
cravings
nd as a prevent
drug
for
heart
disease
. During the planning phase the potential business
opportunity
of the exiting
drug
is an
alyzed.
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
It has shown that the
drug
could be marketed as a preventive measure for
heart
disease
, It could be marketed as a
drug
to kick caffeine habit and we could introduce the
drug
in ne
w
Suggestion
new markets
a new market
market
. Corporate st
rategy p
Suggestion
strategic
lanning would help us determine how the
drug
could be marketed.
For example
, based on the organization strategy to lead in
heart
disease
prevention
drug
manufacturing.
This
could be marketed as a cost effective
drug
for
heart
disease
prevention. In the pre
development
stage we identify the value of the
opportunity
.
For example
, In our case marketing it in new countries would provide the organization a financial value with an increase in revenue.
Also
other risks and issues are an
alyzed a
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
nd managed.
For ex
ample legal r
Accept comma addition
example, legal
isks like approval from governing bodies and limitations like restricted access to data for analysis are identified and addressed.
This
has very less impact on
development
since the
drug
was already sold for 5 years. So the process is going to be sa
me m
Suggestion
the same
ay with the addition of exporting it to other countries. Post
development
after the product is launched the sales could be compared to the
market
valuation done during pre
development
and the process could be reviewed and optimized.
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