Despite a variety of sports facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

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Nowadays, numerous sports facilities and gyms have been building every day to encourage people to get fit.
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, the number of people who are not getting fit is
also
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increasing.
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essay will point out what causes
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problem
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and solutions to solve it. Health
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
and gyms appear everywhere, from the big streets to smaller ones. Sometimes, they appear in advertisements online or television. Yet, there are still a lot of people who are going to the
gym
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every day. The
problem
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is likely because of the growth of distance technology, especially things like tablets or
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smart phones
. People will prefer staying at home scrolling down on their phones, and checking emails every minute, rather than spending hours in the
gym
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to get fit. We all know that the internet is so attractive that no one can stay up all day without using it.
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, the membership fee of some gyms and health
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an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
centres
is out of many people's budgets. Talking about the
gym
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is not practice machines alone, but
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the decorations and more. Leading to a
problem
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that the membership fees are
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increasing. People will rather spend their money on other purposes than on
gym
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membership.
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, there are still some solutions that we can take to solve
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problem
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.
Firstly
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, the internet is
such
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a powerful thing that could bring us closer together. So why don't we bring exercises on the internet so people can still stay at home and working at the same time? Yet, there are still some disadvantages of training at home,
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as space or equipment, but less is more than nothing.
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, in terms of encouraging people to go to the
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, we can have discounts for them by
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the cut
a cut
on decorations. In conclusion, fitness has always been a major concern of people throughout the time, still some problems are leading to people not getting fit. But there are some steps that we can take to keep them fit and healthy.
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