Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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School
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examination is the best way to judge the future of students if
concepts
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the concepts
of subjects are clear. Tests and scrutiny are
main feature
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the main feature
a main feature
main features
of
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school system
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the school system
school systems
in most nations. In my opinion, advantages of educational testing does not outweigh any negative aspects.
To begin
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with merits, assessments and tests are essential in
school
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in schools to know the
students
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students'
student's
capabilities in various
subject
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subjects
so that
quality
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the quality
of students gets promoted to the
further
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classes. As it
also
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motivates students to do more hard work and achieve success in
examination
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examinations
the examination
. Tests and exams
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also helps
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also help
society and
individuals
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individual
individual's
individuals'
country as it produces good quality of workers like Doctors, Engineers, Nurses, Bankers,
etc
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as only deserving students pass out
from
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of
school
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and get admission in colleges. So examinations do have some positive outcomes.
On the other hand
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, it
also
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has some disadvantages. In order to, produce good students education system ignores the students who are poor in studies. Students who are unable to perform well in exams gets
demotivated
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and they go to trauma. It disturbs the mental health of children and affects the mind. Most of the students are
also
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committing suicide because they feel like waste garbage.
Although
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exams are important for students in
school
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, but, it has no relation to the success. Most countries' education systems only judges
students
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students'
memory power rather than his/her knowledge or creativity. To conclude, exams and tests are only useful if it clears the basic concepts.
Although
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, it has some advantages, but it does not outweigh demerits. And one should always remember that a “Single sheet of paper can not decide
students future
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the students' future
students' future
.
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