You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences. Write at least 250 words.

Children

is known

Suggestion

are known

as the future of us, so that the education for children is one of the most

norable

worthy of notice

notable

aspects. Some people

concern

Suggestion

are concerned

that we should encourage the

sense

of

competition

in children should be

encourage

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encouraged

. In fact, the

sense

of

competition

is the main reason

of

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to

hard-working try and succeed. Children with

sense

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a sense

of

competition

would have more

resparation

to study, and have more encouragements in any activities. But it can lead to some wrong ways of thinking so teaching them carefully about

sense

of

competition

is absolutely essential.

On the other hand

, some others claim that teaching children that cooperation rather than compete can turn

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

more useful adults. Co-operation is of the fundamental abilities that a human should have, children can not study effectively if they don’t interact with their parents. Human can not survive if they live alone. In summary, I think that

sense

of

competition

and cooperation is both very essential. A successful person is the one has

sense

of

competition but

Accept comma addition

competition, but

knows how to cooperate with others.