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Money spent on book on the Internet in the Uk.Books bought on the internet by UK Country

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The line graph provides information about the amount of money incurred on online book shopping in the UK from 1997 to 2002
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 four UK countries in terms of the proportion of books bought online.
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 the compared countries the England had
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the highest percentage
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the other 3 countries
 As we can see by line graph, in 1997, money spent on books on the internet was 10 million. Over the
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 three years, that number rose to 5 million, and in 2000 to around 25 million. Between 2000 and 2002, spending on books grew more slowly. The pie chart shows that the highest rate of online book purchases is 81 percent in England. The remaining 3 UK countries accounted for 10 percent in Wales, 8% in Scotland and 1% in Northern Ireland.
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