Using social networks advantages and disadvantages
Some people think that a social network takes from teenagers a lot of
time
. However
, many teenagers say that they spend time
for knowledge
and learn some subjects. In this
essay, both these ideas will be examined before my perspective, which supports the former side of argument,
is given.
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knowledge
should for many works and in our life. If we want to develop our traditions or our country we should give teenagers many chances. We can take for instance
: internet
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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