Some people from poor and rural background from it difficult to get a university education.Universities have to make it easier especially for such groups to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent times poor people from rural

background

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had found it challenging getting admission into universities to acquire higher education.

Its

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It's

expected that universities are to make it

aesier

posing no difficulty; requiring little effort

easier

for them to gain admission.I will in

this

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essay discuss

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essay, discuss

both

veiws

a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

views

and give my conclusions.

Firstly

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,

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,

as the society increases and quality of life improves it has become demanding for people with

university

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degrees to be encouraged to add value to the quality of life.

Unfortunately people

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Unfortunately, people

with poor and rural

background

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found it challenging getting admission into the

university

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.

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Thus as

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Thus, as

a means to get

this

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category of people into the

university

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, universities as their own contribution to their

coperate

of or belonging to a corporation

corporate

social responsibility should grant scholarship to these

category

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categories

of students.

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For example the

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For example, the university

university

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of

lagos

chief port and economic center of Nigeria; located in southwestern Nigeria on the Gulf of Guinea; former capital of Nigeria

Lagos

in the

last

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five years

have granted

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has granted

scholarship

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scholarships

a scholarship

to students from the neighbouring slumps around the

university

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campuses.

Secondly

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,

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,

as the struggle to get to the

university

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increases it

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increases, it

has become expensive and almost difficult for people with poor

background

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to be part of it.A private

university

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in Anambra state

,

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,

King Solomon

University

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established by the missionaries and had

high intake

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a high intake

high intakes

of student of poor

background

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became bankrupt as it cannot sustain the pressure

of

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on

the cost of running the school.Higher education is quite expensive and might be possible to manage without money. In

conclussion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

university

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education though

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education, though

expensive but

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expensive, but

for the overall interest of the

society there

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society, there

is the need for the poor and the people from rural

background

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to be supported by granting scholarship for

this

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category of people.