Some people from poor and rural background from it difficult to get a university education.Universities have to make it easier especially for such groups to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent times poor people from rural
background
had found it challenging getting admission into universities to acquire higher education.
Its
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It's
expected that universities are to make it
aesier
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easier
for them to gain admission.I will in
this
essay discuss
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essay, discuss
both
veiws
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
views
and give my conclusions.
Firstly
,
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,
as the society increases and quality of life improves it has become demanding for people with
university
degrees to be encouraged to add value to the quality of life.
Unfortunately people
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Unfortunately, people
with poor and rural
background
found it challenging getting admission into the
university
.
Thus as
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Thus, as
a means to get
this
category of people into the
university
, universities as their own contribution to their
coperate
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
social responsibility should grant scholarship to these
category
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categories
of students.
For example the
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For example, the university
university
of
lagos
chief port and economic center of Nigeria; located in southwestern Nigeria on the Gulf of Guinea; former capital of Nigeria
Lagos
in the
last
five years
have granted
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has granted
scholarship
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scholarships
a scholarship
to students from the neighbouring slumps around the
university
campuses.
Secondly
,
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,
as the struggle to get to the
university
increases it
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increases, it
has become expensive and almost difficult for people with poor
background
to be part of it.A private
university
in Anambra state
,
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,
King Solomon
University
established by the missionaries and had
high intake
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a high intake
high intakes
of student of poor
background
became bankrupt as it cannot sustain the pressure
of
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on
the cost of running the school.Higher education is quite expensive and might be possible to manage without money. In
conclussion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
university
education though
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education, though
expensive but
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expensive, but
for the overall interest of the
society there
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society, there
is the need for the poor and the people from rural
background
to be supported by granting scholarship for
this
category of people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social mobility
  • Underprivileged
  • Equal opportunities
  • Diversity
  • Financial constraints
  • Affirmative action
  • Scholarships
  • Grants
  • Admission standards
  • Non-profit organizations
  • Outreach programs
  • Meritocracy
  • Education gap
  • Rural areas
  • University admissions
  • Inclusivity
  • Socioeconomic barriers
  • Educational equity
  • Access to education
  • Disadvantaged
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