There are more and more negative news and Someone think that they would be harmful for the individual and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

News is the main resource of information about, what is happening in the world, whether it is bad or good so the news should be true and clear to the public so they can understand it properly. Some argue that so much negative news puts an adverse effect on society or individuals, in my opinion, I partially agree with the aforementioned notion, though, the negative news spreads negativity in the society but it gives us a current report of the incident too. The essay will discuss both facets of a proposal reaching a logical conclusion.

To begin

Linking Words

with, the news is the mean of current knowledge about an incident, even it is positive or negative and it depends on an individual that they will learn from them or want to be a victim of the other negative news. The news reflects a present situation about the world as well and makes aware of individuals from an atrocious incident that could happen to them in the future.

Additionally

Linking Words

, the news

also

Linking Words

provides awareness to the public.

For example

Linking Words

, many newsprints or broadcast daily about the current thefts in a particular city, people who live in that area start taking care of themselves and they become aware of the future.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, the bad news puts harmful effects on the nation in many ways,

firstly

Linking Words

, after hearing or reading the bad material about the victim area people start avoiding to deal with that place, to do so they could lose an opportunity.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, that's why some persons acquired it as a bad sign for them.

Secondly

Linking Words

, people from other countries, start thinking negatively about the victim country after hearing the negative news.

For instance

Linking Words

, in Delhi, people stop sending their girls to the city for any purposes, after getting the news about a horrific rape case that happened with a college girl and from that time people from the other countries presume a bad picture about India that, it is not safe for women. In conclusion, it depends on the person's thinking that how he/she is going to use the knowledge provided by the news, it could be productive if someone takes it for an awareness purpose but it could be a bad sign for some persons.i

Submitted by amndhaliwal7 on Sat May 23 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

377 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below.
The line chart illustrates the number of tourists who visited Malaysia and Dubai in an eight-year period (1995–2003) presented by a university lecturer. Overall, Malaysia’s visitors increased gradually each year but decreased at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the number of Dubai visitors increased at the end of the period, even though it fluctuated at the beginning of the period.
8
band
These days, poverty has become a serious issue around the world. What are the problems that can occur because of this issue and suggest some solutions to overcome this problem
Recently, many people are suffering from poverty around the world. As a result, this increases health issues and the crime rate, but this can be solved by offering more job opportunities and providing free healthcare.
4.5
band
Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whilst, many individuals argue that producing a more fulfill community depends on the small disparities in salary between the wealthiest and the most impoverished members. While, the writer advocates that this is not the best way to create a happy society through ensuring similar income due to the amount of work which the rich contribute to the society and the maintenance of high quality life.
7
band
People doing dangerous sporting activities like scuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?
People who carry out extreme sports, such as scuba diving and bungee jumping, have responsibility for their own safety. Thus, rescue teams do not risk their lives in order to keep those people. However, I opposite to the given argument for several reasons.
5
band
In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?
Smoking is injurious to our health. And in few countries it is not permitted to smoke in the public areas and office properties which implies to maintain a healthy environment fore all. I am strongly in favor of this rule and it can be applied in every country to decereone the overall smoking rate.

There are more and more negative news and Someone think that they would be harmful for the individual and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of tourists visiting Malaysia and Dubai from 1995 to 2003 is presented below.

These days, poverty has become a serious issue around the world. What are the problems that can occur because of this issue and suggest some solutions to overcome this problem

Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People doing dangerous sporting activities like scuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?