Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Some people argue that

car

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ownership has increased so

fastly

with rapid movements

quickly

over the

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thirty years while so many cities in the world now facing with the heavy

traffic

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. I strongly agree with

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statement and has a negative impact to the environment.

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, Following essay will elaborate my

view points

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoints

in detail and reach to a conclusion. In order to justify my

view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoint

, it can be said that many of the cities around the globe today facing a higher

traffic

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than earlier days. Ever since the technology took place in

20th centary

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the 20th century

20th century

there is an immense change in the field of information technology and it has been quite advantageous to

the manufacture cars

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manufacture the cars

. Today, there has a higher demand and higher production

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the cars and now world facing with the heavy

traffic

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jam.

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is encouraged to increase the air pollution and global warming while it has a negative impact on the environment.

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, due to the increase of CO2 and noise of the

vehicals

a conveyance that transports people or objects

vehicles

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people are living in cities may

facing

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face

with several health problems

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as hearing problems

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depression

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ashma

respiratory disorder characterized by wheezing; usually of allergic origin

asthma

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and difficulty in

breating

the bodily process of inhalation and exhalation; the process of taking in oxygen from inhaled air and releasing carbon dioxide by exhalation

breathing

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In order

to minimise the environmental pollution,

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the government

should take necessary actions.

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is only possible if

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the government

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has

right perception and perspective towards the issue of

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jam.

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example increasing

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example, increasing

a higher tax rate for

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ownership for the higher fuel consumption vehicles.

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, encouraging

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manufactures

a business engaged in manufacturing some product

manufacturers

to produce low fuel consumption vehicles [

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Eco

friendly hybrid Cars]. From the analysis of above

arguments it

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arguments, it

can be concluded that, government should take necessary implements to

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stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something

avoid

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jam in the cities.

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, Certain rules have to introduce for control the

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ownership.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some countries, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweigh is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweigh people? How can this problem be solved?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?