In some countries, young people are less polite and respectful to the old. What are the causes? What can be done to solve this?

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Now a day's, with growing development peoples

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tend to change with

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and in some countries were found that teenage don'

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respect

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their elders. In

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essay I would like to express my point of view and talk about what can, be it cause and how to overcome it with relevant examples.

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, with change in

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people's is changing and many of them have lost their culture and adopt a few forms of culture. It can be due to many reasons, but we shouldn'

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neglect and disrespect our elders.

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, In India more and more old age people's are suffering and being thrown out of their house, it can be due to a child lost

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towards their parents or it can be due to when their wife say them to send them out of the house as they want to stay alone.

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is not an Indian culture, In India they use to stay together with whole family where they can watch out for each others back, but with

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it is being found less.

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, If we don'

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our elders

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I believe our upbringing was not right. As there is saying in India " You can find a god in our elder's feet", it mean's that if we want to be wise, we need to learn from them as they have more life experience

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us and they have knowledge of a lot of things which we don'

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, if you want to learn how to drive a car or if we want to learn something at school,

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we elders only teach us as they have experience in that. If we disrespect them,

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we disrespect them the knowledge they give us. To summarize, We should

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our elders as they teach and we can learn a lot of things from them, I think

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issue can be overcome if we provide teen's with knowledge what they are missing out by disrespecting their elders and have a section where they spend

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together, so they can have a talk and understand each other better.

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In some countries, young people are less polite and respectful to the old. What are the causes? What can be done to solve this?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people believe that schoolchildren should do their class work individually. Other people believe that sometimes class work should be done in small groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet. What potential problems may this trend lead to? What solutions can you suggest to deal with it?

NOWADAYS many people complain that they have difficulites getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?

Aircraft have been increasingly used for transport fruit and vegetable to some country where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.