Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries should accept more people, who had to leave
there
of them or themselves
their
country due to unseen circumstances, and give them access to our help,
such
as shelter and food. People who are suffering must be helped by capable nation because, it is not only the symbol of
humanity but
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humanity, but
also
is the opportunity to be more respectful in the global map. Helping is a symbol of
humanity
. We all should help
eachother
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each other
if we are capable because what matters at
last
is being good and helpful. Refugees who are in problem are seeking to be helped. The wealthy and capable countries shall be helping
such
needy refugees because they are
also
the human like us. They
needs
Suggestion
need
to be respected and loved. Being the humans, it is out duty to help
such
helpless people.
For example
: when we see any poor man at the side of a street, we help them either by giving food or by providing money. It reflects our
humanity
. Global
respect
is what all the nation
are seeking
Suggestion
is seeking
is sought
for.
Respect
is gained by helping
eachother
Suggestion
each other
.
For example
:
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was hated by my classmates because of my status. I was rich and they were negative about me because they thought that rich people never helps other. One day I saw one of my friend helpless because he
had ran
Suggestion
ran
was running
out of money and wanted to return to his home. I gave him the money and surprisingly,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was loved in my class the
next
day after the incident had occurred. So the best way to gain
respect
is to have
desire
Suggestion
a desire
the desire
to help
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
without any greed. Rich countries must help the refugees who are waiting for help.
This
helps the country to be more loved by others and gain
respect
in the global scale. Wealthy countries should always be ready to accept more refugees and provide them with food and shelter because it helps the nation to gain
respect
and helping is the symbol of
humanity
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Refugees
  • Asylum seekers
  • Humanitarian aid
  • Integration
  • Multiculturalism
  • Economic impact
  • Public services
  • International law
  • Conventions relating to the status of refugees
  • Labor market
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Burden-sharing
  • Resettlement programs
  • Host country
  • Border security
  • Comprehensive policy
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