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You were hurt in a minus accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter : * Say who you are. * Give details about the accident. * Suggest how the supermarket could prevent a similar accident

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Riba Jacob and I am writing to inform you about the misfortune
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 to me while purchasing groceries from your store. On 24th October at 3: pm, after collecting the toiletry items, I was moving towards the bakery section, meanwhile, I got slipped and twisted my ankle because the floor was wet and your staff did put any caution board in that area to forbid
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 accident. I was in pain and expecting immediate help,
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, my daughter called the receptionist, but she has refused to provide any medical aid, and started yelling at me for not taking precautions. Her cringe attitude was disgraceful and unacceptable. In future to avoid these incidents, I am requesting you to take some stringent action against
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 negligence of your employees and always inform the consumers beforehand by putting notices on the board or through an announcement if any kind of work is in progress. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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