Today's schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Financial intelligence is imperative to be equipped in the students at an early
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; it is essential to make them self-reliant to survive financially. Some folks proclaim that students learn to analyse literature, calculate using trigonometry and understand how photosynthesis works, but often students are inexperienced and helpless after graduation when encountering the real world. As per my perspective, I firmly believe that students should be enlightened with financial education.
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will increase the burden on teachers and students, as students are already having many subjects to study and many teachers will require self-training and even after training they may not feel confident enough to impart the knowledge among children as they are not accustomed to the subject. But these problems can be solved if the financial literacy is considered as a subject of general knowledge and not being graded and the professionals who are good in financial planning are hired to literate the students
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, subjects like mathematics, science that will make the child aware about the field in which they want to make future in, but if the students are not taught how to manage their finances, they will encounter a significant problem in their future. School who teaches Linking Words
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