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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same.Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantage?

#change #people
Change
 is a law of nature
,
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,
which is often considered greater advantageous to humans than reject it and try to consider all things unchanged
.
Accept space
.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
change
.
Accept space
.
 In my opinion
,
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,
change
 or shift has more benefits than drawbacks
.
Accept space
.
 Accepting new things in the form of
change
 can bring prosperity to people"s
life
 in a great level. On the positive sides
,
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,
firstly
 recognising
change
 enables development of an individual by adding growth to their
life
.
Accept space
.
 If it is a good or bad
change
 a person can
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
 self confidence and that may help
todedicate
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to dedicate
 themselves more on a particular thing
.
Accept space
.
 Consider the performance of a
studentin
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student in
 an
acdemic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 year they acquire good
scoresby
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scores by
 changing study habits and be able to build a mentality of
learningfrom
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learning from
 their mistakes.
This
 same thing can be seen in any field of
life
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life, such
such
 as science
,
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,
technology and environment.
In
addition more
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addition, more
 comfortable and easier
life
 is possible
with
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to
change
.
For example
; in the past, letters were used to convey messages which were transformed to
landphones
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land phones
 and
finally
 to online video calls. On the negative side, some people may
encounterdifficulties
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encounter difficulties
 to cope up with some changes in that
caseexcluding
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case excluding
change
 or remain unchanged is seem to be a better option. To illustrate
,
Accept space
,
 homesickness among
hostelers
a hotel providing overnight lodging for travelers
hostels
hostellers
hoteliers
 and boarding school students badly affect their studies.
Moreover
, people with conventional ideas is feeling difficulty to get along with the new technological based changes in the modern society. To conclude
,
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,
despite the demerits of emotional incapabilities and
struggles
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the struggles
 of a small
proporton
the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole
proportion
 of vulnerable
seem
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seems
 to arise due to the sudden transformation
,
Accept space
,
still I believe
change
 always helps
for
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in
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 and make people's
life
 more
comfotable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
comfortably
therefore
 the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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