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Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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According to a particular group of people, the use of e books and modern
technology
 is increasing a lot, which can nullify the importance of newspapers and magazines soon. Partially, I agree with
this
 opinion.
Firstly
, the essay will point out the reasons behind why it can take place. Later, the discussion will be about the limitations of these present world contents which might refrain them from overtaking the traditional contents. Both
newspaper
Suggestion
newspapers
 and magazines are indispensable parts of our daily life. Many of us can't even drink the
first
 cup of tea in a
day
 without giving a glimpse at them. Undoubtedly, they are our daily companion in our routine bound life. But
day
 by
day
, we are being dependent on
technology
.
Therefore
, almost all of us prefer to read the current affairs & worldwide news in e-books & other ways of
technology
 based media. That practice is limiting our use of traditional
newspaper
 & magazines as we can get the news through the blessings of modern
technology
. Who knows, they might be completely dislodged by different means of the modern
day
 reading system?
On the other hand
, people who are very aesthetic, they prefer to read the news from the paper. They find it robotic to gather knowledge from the e books & internet.
Also
, choosing the help of
technology
 in
this
 case can be harmful to the veterans. Since, they have been reading
newspaper
 & magazines for a long time, they would not like to leave their habit too easily,
For example
, as an old guy, my father surely prefers to read news from paper rather than looking at the mobile screen. That approach is comfortable as well as convenient to them. For
this
 reason,
such
 people love to follow the traditional ways to earn some information about the current world. To conclude, it can be said that the use of e books & other modern
technology
 is rapidly escalating.
However
, it is too early to say that they can take the place of
newspaper
 & magazines. But we might see the technological ways ruling
this
 sector for their advance features soon.
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