Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

There is no doubt that, almost every good and bad field has developed significantly over the past few decades and it is too
visiable
capable of being seen; or open to easy view
visible
in behaviour and actions of young people. Nowadays, the teenagers are indulged into various crimes mainly due to advancement in technology.
Firstly
, teenagers are prone to most of the cyber crimes like bullying, harassing (verbal and physical) and even to the extent of a murder. The culprit is the technology that
have been developed
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has been developed
to benefit mankind. But, todays young generation
take
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takes
this
as an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to show off their hacking skills.
However
, children tend to somehow crack out codings that have been protected. In
this
way, children are exposed to various kinds of unwanted sites which urge them to be a psycho and cause adverse problems.
For example
, games like Pubg and Fortnite has created a drastic impact
in
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on
the physical, mental and social well
bieng
the state or fact of existing
being
of an individual.
Consequently
, depression has been another cause of youth crime. Children have
plethora
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a plethora
of videos and sites which open up with a significant amount of cash. Once they are into these, it is very difficult for them to recover from that point of life. Different kinds of videos like suggesting ways to obtain one's personal details is now easier than making an account in social media. Violence in TV programs
also
has an effect on the children as they are not
matured
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mature
enough to differentiate pros and cons.
Finally
, solutions to
this
problem cannot be achieved by a couple of days rather, it takes several months to come out of
this
interesting crime thriller picture. Parents are often busy to supervise their children. In most cities around the world, restrictions
has been put
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have been put
on various sites to prevent these kind of
unpleasent
disagreeable to the senses, to the mind, or feelings
unpleasant
plots. Establishing periodic awareness programs and speeches can curb their mental health more quickly. In conclusion, young generation is a dream come
true yet they are
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true, yet they are
guided in the wrong way. It is important to promote students who have special abilities in computer
skills but
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skills, but
, it has to be used in a more productive way.

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