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Some people say that museums should be free , whereas others think that some entry fee should be there. Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

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Some of the people argue that, museums should be free while other people argue believe that should be fine to charge some entry fee for visitors.
This
 statement is no exception and has its own advantages and disadvantages.Following essay will elaborate my viewpoints in detail and reach to a conclusion. Museums resemble the culture and tradition of the one's country. It is the place where display the all cultural things that used by the ancients.
For example
, Kandy museum in Sri Lanka displaying the costumes of various kings, expensive jewellery, coins and many other things. Some countries have a free entry charge for the visitors while others will not. In order to justify my viewpoint, it can be said that it is fair to provide visitors with free of charge entry which gives equal opportunity to visit the museum without considering their richness, poverty, race, nationality and religion.
On the other hand
, some countries have incurred charges for the entrance. Usually that, those same fees go to the maintenance of the museums. Higher authority uses these community fees for improvement of the facility.
Moreover
, visitors can
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public institutions
  • accessible
  • cultural and historical heritage
  • financial barriers
  • less advantaged socio-economic backgrounds
  • inclusive society
  • maintenance
  • acquisitions
  • quality exhibitions
  • steady source of income
  • overcrowding
  • enjoyable experience
  • moderate
  • sustainable funding
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