The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how aluminium
cans
are recycled. The process consists of many steps(7?), starting from the collection and finishig
(ending?) with a new recycled product. Thanks to Correct your spelling
finishing
this
cycle, the UK is able to reintroduce around
the? 74% of the old wasted Change preposition
apply
cans
.
Firstly
, the used cans
are thrown into specific containers and then
collected by a recycling company and brought in
their factories, ready to initiate the recycling (rep) procedures. Change preposition
to
Secondly
, those cans
, after being cleaned and sorted, are shredded and compacted into blocks.
In the following step, those aluminium blocks are melted at very high temperatures and, once the metal is become pliable, (they are) disposed
/introducedAdd the preposition
ofdisposed
?
on/into special machines that transform them into 2.5 to 6mm thick rolls.
Change the punctuation
.
Finally
, the rolls are used to create brand new cans
, ready to be sold to beverage companies, filled and reintroduced in the market.
The whole cycle it
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is
then
repeated.Submitted by kevinhughesdesign on
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