The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how aluminium

cans

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are recycled. The process consists of many steps(7?), starting from the collection and

finishig

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finishing

(ending?) with a new recycled product. Thanks to

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cycle, the UK is able to reintroduce

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the? 74% of the old wasted

cans

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Firstly

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, the used

cans

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are thrown into specific containers and

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collected by a recycling company and brought

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their factories, ready to initiate the recycling (rep) procedures.

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, those

cans

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, after being cleaned and sorted, are shredded and compacted into blocks. In the following step, those aluminium blocks are melted at very high temperatures and, once the metal is become pliable, (they are)

disposed

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/introduced

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on/into special machines that transform them into 2.5 to 6mm thick rolls.

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, the rolls are used to create brand new

cans

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, ready to be sold to beverage companies, filled and reintroduced in the market. The whole cycle

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then

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repeated.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

149 words

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Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel that this will lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.