International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both views and then give your opinion

It has often been pointed out that international marketing is the easiest as well as
fastest system
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fastest systems
the fastest system
to spread information and to sell a variety of products to millions of people in our global world.
This
essay argues the point of view of somebody about the invasion and the
insistency
continual and persistent demands
insistence
and the one of others who agree with the importance of marketing for its educative aim and its contribution to diffuse ideas, idioms and culture. I personally agree with the
first
statement for different reasons.
Firstly
, I support the idea that
this
way to persuade the population becomes incessant,
ripetitive
repetitive and persistent
repetitive
and annoying.
In addition
, several
tv
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TV
programmes, mainly about cooking, tend to hide products to sell.
For instance
the citizens daily receive
pressing
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press
calls from companies of utilities like
Enel which
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Enel, which
try to offer services or promotion with the aim of catching critical information about their preferences.
Secondly
, it comes to my mind that all my subscriptions to websites resulted in receiving a huge number of newsletters dealing with current situations all over the world, fake proposals of jobs or devices with magnificent features.
Furthermore
, I remember the request to fill surveys because of the necessity
from
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for
companies to monitor the interests of
inhabitants
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the inhabitants
.
On the other hand
, not well developed countries could benefit from
this
form of communication, usually done in English, as they have more difficulties to study languages
.
Accept space
.
As a
consequence they
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consequence, they
feel less isolated and are updated about local and global news. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
strongly believe that International marketing represents most of the time a too much intrusive and
invadent
system to promote products along with a method to gain knowledge about the life of citizens.
Nevertheless
, marketing can play an educative role
for
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in
poorer countries,
for instance
, by improving their skills to communicate in an international language
such
as English.
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