Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

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Dear John, I am so surprised to hear that you have been living in Kyrgyzstan since

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December. I hope you find our city is good for living and working

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because Bishkek is quite a green city. I remember that you had an allergy

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some dust and in

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the level of the dust is very low.

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, you would be an ideal candidate as a tutor in our National University with a huge number of Language Faculties because of your perfect English. On the other side, you could find a lovely job by local head hunters through their web pages. Do you still like fishing? I am asking that because we had an original fishing club, where you could find a few fans of fishing. I would appreciate it if you could find some like-minded in your hobbies and discover new places for your fishing. Please do not hesitate to contact me in case of any questions, With warm wishes, Suzann

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Write a letter to a friend who was coming over to your country to work for 6 months. Suggestion of a city Suggestion of a few jobs that could do Options for this friend make friends with local

We cannot help everyone in the world who needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The title "I had to show courage." Describe a circumstance where you had to exercise courage. What action of yours required a lot of bravery? Afterwards, did you feel proud of yourself? How did your surroundings respond?

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is this a positive or negative development?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?