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Corona virus is taking over the whole world. Some People think that corona virus 🦠 is inevitable while others say that we will soon over come it.discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#corona #virus #world #people
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As we all know that the prevailing virus situation around the world. Everyone is getting afraid of
this
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 outbreak.
This
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 pandemic originates from the city of china, named
Wahan
a city of central China on the Chang Jiang; the commercial and industrial center of central China
Wuhan
 in late 2019. AS it started the economy of China was begin declining.
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, the
covid
a geological formation consisting of an underground enclosure with access from the surface of the ground or from the sea
caved
-19 spread throughout the world. Everyone is getting afraid
from
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of
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viirus
(virology) ultramicroscopic infectious agent that replicates itself only within cells of living hosts; many are pathogenic; a piece of nucleic acid (DNA or RNA) wrapped in a thin coat of protein
virus
verse
 mainly because it
is transfering
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is transferred
is transferring
 from person to person even by just joining the gathering of already infected person. Still the world is stuck in the situation
,
Accept space
,
 weather we could make vaccine for
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fatel
an event (or a course of events) that will inevitably happen in the future
fate
virus
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Virus
 or not.
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 virus seems more deadly than the
spanain
the mass of eggs deposited by fish or amphibians or molluscs
spawning
spanning
 Flu that was erupted in 1918 and was
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 longer for
ywo
being one more than one
two
 years.
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, 5 million plus people
ware
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
 expired due to the deadly Flu.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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