Housing and accomodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

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Nowadays, many cities all over the world face an increasing number of
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
problem which occurs for many reasons. I think
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is mainly because of their high rents and the low wages of the people, but there are some solutions. A reason why landlords rents out their house for a large sum which is identified by the low in the rent-controlled sector and the tenant sometimes has difficulty paying
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amount, especially who has a low income. Another reason could be the lack of adequate income which is directly linked with access to affordable housing and health supports or the experience of discrimination.
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means that, if the
government
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can not create
challanges
take exception to
challenges
for inhabitants to earn an appropriate profit, they will frequently be unable to pay for necessities
such
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as housing, food, childcare, health care and
education
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. A possible solution to create suitable opportunity for the people to get a normal
education
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, because, if they have a high level of
education
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,
Accept space
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even if they get fired, they may easily find a new job in a short period of time.
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, the probability of
homlessness
the state or condition of having no home (especially the state of living in the streets)
homelessness
decreases significantly with the level of
education
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.
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, the
government
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have
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has
to fight poverty on a global scale in order to mitigate the homelessness issue and they should organise some work places in the country so that citizens can earn sufficient money.
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,
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could come in the form of better
education
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in order to improve the probability for well paid jobs and
also
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come in the light of
government
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subsidies for the poorest. In conclusion, the increase of many homeless people in various countries
owe
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owes
mainly to a lack of well-paid jobs and high rental prices.
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, these
problem
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problems
can be dealt with if the
government
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creates new job places for people and support the homeless.
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