The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Accidents on ro

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the roads

re one of the main causes of many injuries around the world. In order to enhance the

road

safety level, some people believe that people who commit on roads should be punished with more serious measures. In my opinion, I agree with that id

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idea, but

t is not the only because the

government

funding should

also

be involved in.

Initially

, using stricter penalty may raise human-being aw

areness.

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aware

They are likely to be more collaborate and focus when using their vehicles, as they would not like to throw an amount of money away. That, indeed, can improve the accidental rate as careless drivers are particularly the group

that is

the root of many

road

avoidable incidents. What is more, high penalties encourage people staying in

door a

within a building

indoors

nd using public transports, which is an imaginative solution for reducing pollution released to our environment as well.

On the other hand

, I am convinced that

government

spending on upgrading infrastructure is likely to improve commuter safety. If the highways didn’t have a sufficient lighting system, there would be no doubt that tr

avelers s

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

truggle, especially during night time. In retrospect, the areas that have accidents taking place fr

equently usually r

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frequently, usually

elate to intersecting junctions, lack of signs or mirrors and unstable

road

surface. These obstacles might possibly be solved by reinforcing civil infrastructure which is funded by incentives from the state. In Vietnam,

for example

, there was a

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an

normous inclination of the number of traffic accidents and the mortality rates when

government

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allocates

ore resources to transportation aspects. All in all, punishing more seriously on drivers of

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offending against or breaking a law or rule

offending

s a method to be safer on

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the road

however

, to achieve the optimal consequence

government

funding should take precedence over.